This image shows my bus stop poster before any corrections were made. Here I have desaturated the colours of the poster, bringing out the red, black and blue in order for them to highlight the NHS and School Nurse Team logo along with the title. I think that this still looks too bright and therefore may not attract my target audience as it might be deemed too childish.
The improvements I will be making to this product will include changing the text at the bottom of the page because I think it needs to be shorter and clearer, to make the point I am trying to get across more obvious. I will also desaturate the colours again and rearrange the text, making the title slightly bigger and possibly movign the links to the bottom of the page next to their logos.